But also, I think there were too many unnecessary sound effects, and some of the animation sequences were too fast and choppy.
May I recommend you watch a couple of cartoons like Spongebob, Chowder, or Flapjack, or something of the sort, and pay attention to how they lay out their sound effects. 10 stars for effort though. :]0
Thank you so much for your advice to me.
BILLY MAYS HERE
with OXYCLEAN FORMULA. :c
This is definitely the greatest anime parody I've ever seen. Nice job, Ego. Made me lmao all over the place. Especially towards the end where you can hear the script paper rustling? Haha...
ALL MI TEN R BELuNG 2 DIS.
Dude, that was freakin' sweet.
It was alright. It looks like you're holding on to the old MS Paint tools "Circle Tool" and "Line Tool" though. Try to free-hand your art some time. Otherwise it was good, hehe, "dumb bass"
The target of making this toon for me was to get some experience in difficult many-layer animations, so I haven't payed much attention to drawing. Anyway, thanks for the review. Next time I'll try to draw graphics more carefully.
Nice art, good sounds, nice lip syncing. However, I think it's WAY too short and would be better if you added more of the bad aspects behind Call of Duty 4. :D
<3 that game.
The art was good, but try using less smoothing on the brush. Also, I think it'd look better if you used less gradients, and the animation was kind of choppy and didn't really make sense. Better luck next time, though.
woot! all my 5 are belong to this!
Screw 5, all my TEN are belong to this!! This is a GREAT movie, lol. It really reminded me of Wall-E, but it didn't really have an epic plotline like Wall-E which didn't drag me in to want to see more story. That's a good thing because there probably won't be a full-length movie. LOL. Rock on, man. Rock on.
Kind of short.
Maybe if it were longer, it would be a bit better. Also, the figure of your character is a little disproportional. Never-the-less I'm giving this cartoon a ten because it definitely deserves it.
Great flash, Great animation
However, I think you could have made some facial expressions a little more exaggerated. Don't be afraid to go outside of the box with emphasis. I would've given you a 10 but I think the voices could have been a teeny bit closer to Egoraptor's. Nice job though, better than anything I would make. :D
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