ToastEatsYou's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mr.Cula 2 - Moski]

Good art.

But also, I think there were too many unnecessary sound effects, and some of the animation sequences were too fast and choppy.
May I recommend you watch a couple of cartoons like Spongebob, Chowder, or Flapjack, or something of the sort, and pay attention to how they lay out their sound effects. 10 stars for effort though. :]0

mrcula007 responds:

Thank you so much for your advice to me.

[No Stress]

Artwork.

It was alright. It looks like you're holding on to the old MS Paint tools "Circle Tool" and "Line Tool" though. Try to free-hand your art some time. Otherwise it was good, hehe, "dumb bass"

Dr-Terzalo responds:

The target of making this toon for me was to get some experience in difficult many-layer animations, so I haven't payed much attention to drawing. Anyway, thanks for the review. Next time I'll try to draw graphics more carefully.